There is an interesting serpentine flow to the rhythm and visual structure of your piece. It lulls softly as we read. I almost missed that the secret to "good luck" was tucked within as I fell into the trance of deeply desiring this journey.

I love your inquisitiveness about the concept of luck and it reminds me to be more aware of it because it brings with it innumerable smiles.

I very much enjoyed this piece! Thank you for reminding me how lucky I am.